Mission:
To be a superior student over all other applicants to law school and and learning all the tools and keys to become and success full and excellent lawyer and citizen for the United States.
Vision:
To become a very successful and highly admired lawyer and to lead a great career in politics.
Values:
My Values are to be a honest hard working American that works to become a better student and stronger citizen, in hope to better serve our country.
Core Competencies:
My Core Competencies is my people skills and my speaking abilities in front of large groups.
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Jordan,
I really like what you wrote for each section. I can honestly get a sense of where you want to go in life in terms of short and long-term. I know, from reading, that you want to go on to Law school after FPU and have a life involved in politics as a "dream". I also got a good sense of the type of worker you are. I feel that this is the strongest part of your mission statement.
On the other hand, I think you need to focus a bit more on grammar and sentence structure. I was forced to read some of the sections a few times before I understood exactly what you were trying to say. My suggestion to fix that is to maybe slow your thoughts down. It seems as though you wrote it in an immense rush! If that's not the case, then the Write Place or even a peer who is a strong writer can help you convey your thoughts in a more organized fashion.
Hey Jordan,
I believe you have a good understanding of where you are going to be in a few years and thats awesome. I feel like you are going to be a successful lawyer but I don't agree with you on your values. There is no such thing as being an honest person in politics. It has never happened and will never happen. Thats the reason I can't stand politics. Why would I want to watch some idiot stand up for our country but just by giving false ideas and never go through with them. If you can show me how you will become honest in politics then maybe, otherwise I suggest sticking with just being a lawyer.
Just make sure you fix up your mission statement before the paper a little bit. To many "ands" that shouldn't even be in that spot. Other than that great job.
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